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Wednesday, December 8, 2010

3WW:-Judge, Nightfall, Safety



Looking out of the door, the fear crept inside slowly,
            Judging the condition in the best manner he could, 
without having any second thoughts in mind,
              He looked around carefully but before the nightfall approached,
He ran for safety and reached in no time.

            
         What it would be for a kid? The arms of his mother.

10 comments:

jaerose said...

You really captured the anxiety of being little and needing to run to the safety of your mother..neatly done..Jae

Grandma said...

It's only as we get older that we have more difficulty discerning where safety lies. Nice job on this.

Double Duty

Rinkly Rimes said...

Part of an intriguing tale!

Lost in thoughts said...

Nice job here again. Bliss is in the arms of mother.

Julie Jordan Scott said...

Ohhhh, I love this moment with my children... and loved it with my mother... and I hope to love it with their children.

Hope to read more of your words soon.

My 3ww for this week.

Vibhuti B said...

So sweet! Well depicted thoughts and good use of the prompt!

groundtoground.org said...

That sums up my life right now. I'm really going to miss it when they grow up.

senderupwords said...

Wonderful. Love and Light, Sender

subtlescribbler said...

good one. short but complete :)
sarah

lalita choudhary said...

Thankuu!! :)